Hi, I'm Saphira Bright

Line editing & prose feedback for YA and thriller fiction writers.

I'm a fiction writer and editor with a deep love for YA and emotionally-driven narratives. I've spent years studying the craft of storytelling. I finished my own 500-page novel draft before I turned 19. I edit with your voice in mind, not against it. I specialise in developmental & prose clarity, emotional resonance, atmosphere & character consistency.

What I offer

— Line editing & prose feedback: $35-50/chapter
— Full chapter editorial letter included
— Delivered in Microsoft Word with Track Changes/Google Docs Commentator
— Genres: YA, Thriller, Fantasy, Slice-of-life, Horror

What Writers Say

"Though I grew up reading ACOTAR and The Folk of the Air, sucking in as much inspiration as possible and going through a lot of editing myself, it wasn't enough. So I'd like to thank Saphira for helping me with it. Honestly speaking, I wasn't aware of the places that needed editing but after working with her, my manuscript felt ALIVE. Thanks again to this amazing person for her perfect suggestions and comments that made me more confident with my writing. It was an unforgettable experience." - Lady Sunset

Feel free to contact me for further inquiry

Sample Edits

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